For my third source I have chosen a document written by Sarah Harder herself titled “Equity by 2000 Meeting the Nairobi Challenge”. I chose this source because it helps explain where Sarah Harder wanted to go and what she wanted to change by the year 2000. She put her heart and her soul into the women’s movement and wanted to make a change. That is just what she did.
Attending many different forums and meetings, Sarah wanted to prove to the people what women not just in one city but everywhere, deserved equality. This document explains her experience to Nairobi Kenya where she attended a forum. This forum helped women gain confidence and showed their maturity. They wanted to prove that women were just as good as men. In this document Sarah tells how the Nairobi Challenge was indeed a challenge. Yet fighting for equal rights was going to be a long road, but Sarah Harder would not give up. She states the it’s overwhelming and won’t be easy. But she never doubts her self for a second that Equity by the year 2000 would be met.
Sarah had many experiences at forums and with her experiences she came up with a new plan. This plan was designed to build a new political base for the feminization of power. To be most effective the power base would need three components. It would need active collaboration among increasing numbers of women in elective and appointive office. Next on the outside of the government they would need networks of advocacy organizations that support good public policy decisions. And last, inside the government they would need an agency responsible to executive and legislative branches, which assures effective implementation and program delivery. This would all be accomplished.
At the end of her document Sarah states that leaders show others how something can be done. Its 1986 and she has not a doubt in her mind that equity would be met in just 14 years. She is persuasive on getting others to jump onto her bandwagon and give women equal rights. This is accomplishes. It’s all starting to make sense now… Sarah Harder made a huge impact in the women’s rights movement. She never gave up. This document is a bit confusing because it was then and not now. I’m hoping that I can find something that explains all that she accomplished before my explanatory essay. This helps me know who she was and partially what she accomplished. At least what she wanted to accomplish. Now what did she accomplish at UWEC? That’s my next step.
I think that this is a really good source and even though it didn’t answer your initial question it gave you the very basic background information that is helpful in beginning to understand where she came from as well as her initial goals. I think it was beneficial to incorporate what her goals were and when she wanted to have those goals met. You did a good job summarizing and explaining what the article was trying to convey to it’s audience but I think you should add rhetorical terms too.
Thanks! I agree, I will add rhetorical terms when I revise. Hopefully I can find a source that better explains what she accomplished!
This seems like a great source you found! Your summary seems a little basic, I would go more in depth to give your readers a better understanding because they’re not reading the information you’re finding. I would also talk about the purpose, audience, rhetorical distance for more context.
I agree! thanks for the advice, it will help!